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On the car ride (boring) in to work this morning I was listening to the “Indie Holiday” Pandora radio station that I just yesterday began to cultivate after copying it to my personal account.

To the point: When I reached my office, as I was driving up the driveway a song by Mindy Smith came on. I have never heard of this artist but was immediately pulled in by her voice and the arrangement of the song. I guess I am a sucker for a female bluegrassy singer (think Alison Krauss). To follow that tangent for a second, bluegrass is a wonderful genre because it is mostly upbeat and in a major key but allows for some harmonic exploration. It also offers the benefits of country-like songwriting without the twang that causes my ears to bleed.

Now back to the lyric: The song is titled “Follow the Shepherd Home” from the album My Holiday. The first lyric of the song is as follows:

When my paper heart’s in a frantic wind

Before this morning the phrase “paper heart” never had any meaning or impact on me but when you put a paper heart in a frantic wind it completely makes sense to me and transports me to that dark windy landscape with a weathered waxy tissue paper heart fluttering about in the gusts.

The real point: A great lyric can transcend the words on the paper and implant tremendous visuals into the listener’s head as to transport them from their current physical location.

Thanks for reading and keep writing great song lyrics. One line at a time is all it takes.

They won’t hold me like you do – by Jeremy Blanchard
Written: May 5 – 7, 2012
Dedicated to: My awesome wife

This is the first song I’ve written in over four years. I am well aware of it’s faults, so be kind.
As my lyric teacher once said, “S**t makes the best fertilizer.”

It is a rather simple song, much simpler than most of my songs of old.

My favorite line is in the chorus:
“they won’t smile when the lights are off”

Here’s to more to come.
Thanks for listening.

For those interested, here are the lyrics:
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I could grab the stars from the sky
I could run them around the world
I could fly to the moon with my cosmonaut crew
But they won’t hold me like you do

If the storm clouds come and rip us apart
If the night dragons burn us up
If the gates of hell come take me from you
they won’t hold me like you do

[CHORUS]
They won’t hold me like you hold me
they won’t smile when the lights are off
they won’t sacrifice against love’s advice
They won’t hold me like you do

If the police come and take me to jail
If the magistrate keeps me without bail
You will still have my heart until it turns blue
cause they won’t hold me like you do

[CHORUS]

When the lions come and ravage my bones
When the floodwaters come and sweep away our home
if you say you love me there’s nothing more to do
cause they won’t hold me like you do

[CHORUS]

The other day I heard Joe Pug on WUMB and was intrigued. The song was Speak Plainly, Diana.

First let me step back and say, Yes, I was listening to the radio!

Since my wife and I choose to subscribe to Rhapsody I am able to listen to Joe’s album without having to pay any extra for it. I gave it two good listen throughs and here are my takeaways.

The title song is perhaps the best on the album. It’s upbeat and has an intersting melody and phrasing similar to Patty Griffin and The Crash Test Dummies.
After the title song the next six songs are barely worth listening to. The second song, How Good You Are is the best of those six.
The last three tracks on the album are worth listening to for sure. Disguised as Someone Else has an interesting story reveal at the end. I wasn’t sure why he would want to be someone else until the very end.
Bury Me Far (From My Uniform) is held up by its melody and structure but also has an interesting and compelling enough story.
The final track, which is the same as I heard on WUMB, is really only worth listening to because it is upbeat. The story isn’t super compelling.

Conclusion: Overall, a good effort by a young Joe Pug. I would suggest writing more uptempo songs. I realize this isn’t easy for many folk singers, me included, however, the two uptempo tracks on this album really hold it together and make it worth listening to.

See Joe Pug at Great Scott in Alston, MA on Thursday March, 4th at 8:30pm.
http://www.joepugmusic.com/

On Saturday we watch some of Saturday Night Live, which was a rerun, with John Bon Jovi hosting and Foo Fighters as additional musical guests. This got me to thinking, the Foo Fighters have been around for a while now and I seem to like of their stuff. Since Rachel and I subscribe to Rhapsody and use it every single day I am listening to the entire Foo Fighters catalog. I do this when I get into a band late. I did this with Radiohead last year.

Foo Fighters Discography
* Foo Fighters (1995)
* The Colour and the Shape (1997)
* There Is Nothing Left to Lose (1999)
* One by One (2002)
* In Your Honor (2005)
* Echoes, Silence, Patience & Grace (2007)

This post is really a recap of my twitter updates.
I found the album Foo Fighters to be rather juvenile in both lyrics and harmonic progression.
The Colour and the Shape album was rather blase and uninspired. The Foo Fighters seemed to have gone through quite a few personnel changes in the early years and perhaps it shows in this album.
There is Nothing Left to Lose was a great step forward in maturity of lyrics and musicianship. I would say this album is where the Foo Fighters really fell into their own. The album started out very strong but eventually petered out towards the end leaving after tastes of the previous album.
One by One was on par with the previous album with evidence of a further developed song writer in Dave Grohl and a further cohesive band unit.
In Your Honor was overproduced and somebody turned up the compression way too far which resulted in a wash of sound, which is much different then Pink Floyd’s Wall of Sound. For more information on compression and the effect thereof see my previous post. This album seemed lost in the sea of mediocre alt. rock from the early part of this century. This album falls into many cliche patterns of song forming and lyric writing.
Echoes, Silence, Patience & Grace is by far the most intricate and complex album. This album is definitely the high point in the Foo Fighter’s song writing and musicianship. There may be some recentcy effect with this album but I am trying to remain objective and analytical. The Pretender, which is one of the singles from this album, is the most interesting and powerful song. The lyrics, while not telling a complete story do portray a mature sense of defiance to the man. I like the lyrics except for the last phrase “who are you”. I don’t think it fits and detracts from the emotional peak of the chorus. This album flattened out in the middle. But came back nicely with a song highly influenced by John Lennon, Statues.